Monday, December 12, 2005

desk crit no. 7> From Elizabeth

Wow! Your visual appeal is out the roof!
Suggestions: "examples of artwork, hear and read thoughts of artists, see artists creating art, and add your own thoughts on creativity. What is creativity? Will this project will spark your interest in arts and creativity?" - period after artwork. Hear and read..... take second will out of last sentence.

on Project Info
there does seem to be some common threads there does seem to be some common threads - change does to do
I can't see the "i" in relfection in the header.
I only wish I knew how to do half what you have done! Very impressive.

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